This is the second draft of my film magazine, as you can see I have changed the font and the colors of my text, I have also changed the location of my film title and sub stories, and I have made a banner at the top and bottom of the page. I have used boxes with text in and lines to separate the different stories. I have changed the location of my barcode and date/price.
I now need my picture and a background for my magazine and two small pictures for another story to complete it.
feedback would be appreciated :) thanks

The masthead is good as it is conventionally positioned on the magazine, although I like the use of the "2" as it pushes the boundaries of convention.. The font on the main headin is good and appropriate. good start though :)
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